Uh oh. We wrote a paper based on a paper in the book for our positioning assignment. We didn't even do this. Which mean one of our groups did it wrong. Anyway, yours looks good. Good information.
Looks good! We based the outline of our paper on the positioning framework too. We didn't do the testimonials or references though, just data backing up our features and benefits. I think you should have specific data not just link out to it. Are you guys converting this into a paper for the final product? I think that's what is supposed to happen.
This is really good. I like that you filled out your positioning framework using this document- pretty clever.We did our positioning framework in a paper, but I love how your group did yours. I liked feature #2 "Expert Knoweldge in Eating Trends"- - it's something, as a consumer, that I would like to see with a company . (i.e. Subway)
I like this too, the only thing I would consider doing is maybe a short write-up for somebody who is really dumb and can't understand this table of information right away.
I am wondering how you are positiong yourself towards your secondary audience? Most of your info was directed toward Your primary audience which seems to be directly oppisite? I think it will be hard to include your secondary audience.
Hey, I think this is a good outline. I believe it's suppose to be a paper, we will find out. In addition I would add some statistics to develop your points more.
Yah, like Kevin said. One of us did it wrong, I guess well find out on Friday. But as far as the information goes, it was very well put together and organized. Good work
I thought that this was AMAZING! I think that this group had the best paper, it is edgy, pleasing to the eye and with lots of info for a layman to understand. Great Job
Uh oh. We wrote a paper based on a paper in the book for our positioning assignment. We didn't even do this. Which mean one of our groups did it wrong. Anyway, yours looks good. Good information.
ReplyDeleteLooks good! We based the outline of our paper on the positioning framework too. We didn't do the testimonials or references though, just data backing up our features and benefits. I think you should have specific data not just link out to it. Are you guys converting this into a paper for the final product? I think that's what is supposed to happen.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good. I like that you filled out your positioning framework using this document- pretty clever.We did our positioning framework in a paper, but I love how your group did yours. I liked feature #2 "Expert Knoweldge in Eating Trends"- - it's something, as a consumer, that I would like to see with a company . (i.e. Subway)
ReplyDeleteI like this too, the only thing I would consider doing is maybe a short write-up for somebody who is really dumb and can't understand this table of information right away.
ReplyDeleteI am wondering how you are positiong yourself towards your secondary audience? Most of your info was directed toward Your primary audience which seems to be directly oppisite? I think it will be hard to include your secondary audience.
ReplyDeleteHey, I think this is a good outline. I believe it's suppose to be a paper, we will find out. In addition I would add some statistics to develop your points more.
ReplyDeleteYah, like Kevin said. One of us did it wrong, I guess well find out on Friday. But as far as the information goes, it was very well put together and organized. Good work
ReplyDeleteI thought that this was AMAZING! I think that this group had the best paper, it is edgy, pleasing to the eye and with lots of info for a layman to understand. Great Job
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